Evaluation Part Two : Generic Conventions

Evaluation Part Four : Audience Feedback

    In this blog post I will be showing a video on part four of my evaluation

                

Evaluation Part Five : Technologies

In this blog post I will be showing a video on part five of my evaluation

                

Evaluation Part Three : Combination of your main product and ancillary texts

                     In this blog post I will be showing a video on part three of my evaluation


            

Evaluation Part One: Brief

          In this blog post I will be showing a video on part one of my evaluation

Below are the links which take you to some of my work!

The pitch powerpoint

          

The pitch presentation

The encounter 

Production Log Thirteen

In this blog post I'm going to write about what I did during this week,This will include the final editing of our production "Antique" and completing the ancillary products this week.

     

Hand drawn design of poster

Draft of  poster

Hand drawn magazine review

Draft of magezine

                                   During this week we had to complete our ancillary products!

This was our first initial idea for the poster and we have stuck with this design as you can see in our completed version.Overall this was very easy to create as my partner has the skills and experience using Photoshop and therefore this made the job easier for us when creating the ancillary ad therefore saved alot of time and effort.

Poster review

Feedback from teacher-

8-9/10 - When re-working the poster this could be 10 out of 10

+ A very professional look towards the whole poster
+ visually very attractive 
- Change names to be more conventional as we only used two names,
- "dare to collect me" should be bigger

- Bring the hand a bit higher as there's a lot of space on top of the poster. 


Magazine review

Feedback from teacher- 5-6/10

+ A very professional look towards the whole magazine
+ visually very attractive
+ layout overall very conventional
- Change text, needs to be more chatty
- Change images
- Paragraphs to long
- Enlarge the text
- Needs a quote next to title
-Remove some on the text as it unnecessary 

Final Film Poster

This is my final poster     

          

      

Final Magazine Review

This is our final magazine review

Short film: Antique

In this blog post I will be showcasing my short film Antique! 

Draft Ancillary Product: Film Poster

In this blog post I will be showing my second Ancillary Product, our film poster.this is our first draft and there will be a few changes to match the Institutional Codes as some aspects are missing or do not match the poster.

                                     

Feedback from teacher-

8-9/10 - When re-working the poster this could be 10 out of 10

+ A very professional look towards the whole poster
+ visually very attractive 
- Change names to be more conventional as we only used two names,
- "dare to collect me" should be bigger
- Bring the hand a bit higher as there's a lot of space on top of the poster.

Draft Ancillary Product: Film Poster Magazine review

In this blog post I will be showing my first Ancillary Product, our magazine review.this is our first draft and there will be a few changes to match the institutional codes of a magazine review as some aspects are missing or do not match the review. 

Feedback from teacher- 5-6/10

+ A very professional look towards the whole magazine 
+ visually very attractive
+ layout overall very conventional
- Change text, needs to be more chatty
- Change images
- Paragraphs to long
- Enlarge the text 
- Needs a quote next to title
-Remove some on the text as it unnecessary