Evaluation Part Two : Generic Conventions

Evaluation Part Four : Audience Feedback

    In this blog post I will be showing a video on part four of my evaluation

                

Evaluation Part Five : Technologies

In this blog post I will be showing a video on part five of my evaluation

                

Evaluation Part Three : Combination of your main product and ancillary texts

                     In this blog post I will be showing a video on part three of my evaluation


            

Evaluation Part One: Brief

          In this blog post I will be showing a video on part one of my evaluation

Below are the links which take you to some of my work!

The pitch powerpoint

          

The pitch presentation

The encounter 

Production Log Thirteen

In this blog post I'm going to write about what I did during this week,This will include the final editing of our production "Antique" and completing the ancillary products this week.

     

Hand drawn design of poster

Draft of  poster

Hand drawn magazine review

Draft of magezine

                                   During this week we had to complete our ancillary products!

This was our first initial idea for the poster and we have stuck with this design as you can see in our completed version.Overall this was very easy to create as my partner has the skills and experience using Photoshop and therefore this made the job easier for us when creating the ancillary ad therefore saved alot of time and effort.

Poster review

Feedback from teacher-

8-9/10 - When re-working the poster this could be 10 out of 10

+ A very professional look towards the whole poster
+ visually very attractive 
- Change names to be more conventional as we only used two names,
- "dare to collect me" should be bigger

- Bring the hand a bit higher as there's a lot of space on top of the poster. 


Magazine review

Feedback from teacher- 5-6/10

+ A very professional look towards the whole magazine
+ visually very attractive
+ layout overall very conventional
- Change text, needs to be more chatty
- Change images
- Paragraphs to long
- Enlarge the text
- Needs a quote next to title
-Remove some on the text as it unnecessary 

Final Film Poster

This is my final poster     

          

      

Final Magazine Review

This is our final magazine review

Short film: Antique

In this blog post I will be showcasing my short film Antique! 

Draft Ancillary Product: Film Poster

In this blog post I will be showing my second Ancillary Product, our film poster.this is our first draft and there will be a few changes to match the Institutional Codes as some aspects are missing or do not match the poster.

                                     

Feedback from teacher-

8-9/10 - When re-working the poster this could be 10 out of 10

+ A very professional look towards the whole poster
+ visually very attractive 
- Change names to be more conventional as we only used two names,
- "dare to collect me" should be bigger
- Bring the hand a bit higher as there's a lot of space on top of the poster.

Draft Ancillary Product: Film Poster Magazine review

In this blog post I will be showing my first Ancillary Product, our magazine review.this is our first draft and there will be a few changes to match the institutional codes of a magazine review as some aspects are missing or do not match the review. 

Feedback from teacher- 5-6/10

+ A very professional look towards the whole magazine 
+ visually very attractive
+ layout overall very conventional
- Change text, needs to be more chatty
- Change images
- Paragraphs to long
- Enlarge the text 
- Needs a quote next to title
-Remove some on the text as it unnecessary 

Production Log Twelve

This weeks production Log

Overall we completed our short film and received fab feedback from the teacher, I and my partner are really happy with our final product however we would like put in some sound effects and also make the antagonist look a bit more frightening by putting special effects.

                             

During this week we also had concentrate on editing our short film "Antique" on final cut pro.We have completed around about 80% of our editing,this includes the opening of the short film,when she finds out that theirs something wrong with the necklace,When she comes back after throwing the necklace away and the ending scene of a little kid discovering the necklace.There is a small section left to edit which is the scene of me disposing the necklace.Originally we already had the shots of the disposing scene but when looking at the shots I was not satisfied as it was to simple and quite boring to watch.I and my partner decided to re-film these shot and make it more creative.



goodmayes park

                                   

Re-filming shots

We also have re-filmed a section of our short film,the disposing scene of the necklace.When we first recorded this scene the mise-en-scene was horrendous and also the camera language was not to great.All the shots did not work effectively and did not really connote any meaning towards the scene.It was very unclear.Therefore we re-recorded the scenes in a better location and added more camera language which actually would reflect her emotions in that particular situation.

We wanted to be very creative in this scene and therefore we wanted to add a 360 shot with jump cuts of the protagonist looking confused and scared as to what she will do with the necklace. I got this inspiration from my class students Simran Bhatti and Paman Uppal who created a 360 shot in their British social realism opening sequence "4WALLS".This is shown at 0.09-0.15.This was really effective in their sequence as how they did it and I would like to replicate that specific scene and create in a different way for my short film.

Updated Script

In this blog post I will be updating my shooting script as we had few problems with our other script when filming "Antique".

                              

 *Please download document and double click the boxes to access the full explanations of "antique script"

Production Log Eleven

 In this bog post I will be writing about my production log

Filming at Portobello road

Editing

During this week we have started to edit our two scenes which we recorded last Saturday at the apartment at streatham hill. Looking thorough all of the footage we have demonstrated well to our examiners as to how well we use the camera and how we both broadened our creativity in filming, This was shown thorough the different shot types or different movements and angles we created. When uploading all of the footage I and my partner started to put everything in its right place and started to trim down and to create an continuity of each different shots. This took several of hours as we wanted every shot to be perfect. When looking at the rough edit of the short film we had a quick overview of the clip and wrote some notes down as to what needed to be improved.Here are some criticism which I and my partner wrote for my short film "some shots are to shaky,the lighting is to bright or to low at times,some shots are really not needed which is wasting time and duration of the short film". 

The criticism did not really affect my partner that much as he already  knew that the lighting would be way off at times,my  partner had a plan from the very beginning when creating the short film that he wanted to change the lighting saturation of each shot on after effects so that every lighting of the shot is fairly the same.We also resolved the situation of the shaky movements,after watching it again the shakiness created a more realistic approach to the short film as it creates a more of an  tensed atmosphere,it will be more boring if we used a static shot and it will not create any enigma or emotions towards the audience.Hence the jerky movements will make the audience more interested and involved as they will know that the protagonist is feeling very scared and therefore reflected of the protagonist emotion.

Recreating the institutional logo


New Logo which I created on fireworks

During this week I also recreated the logo as I felt that my partners initial idea for his logo did not really fit the style of our short film.I created the logo in fireworks as I felt more comfortable working on that programme as I  already have some  experience on working on the software.On my logo I created a silhouette of a girl whos holding a dolly and playing around with it,the girl is standing on a throne with leaves on it,This creates enigma as to who the girl is, why shes playing with the doll,and what is the thrones symbolising.All of the enigmatic symbols is therefore reflecting the name of the institutional logo "Enigmatic films productions" and it works effectively towards the audience as its creating mystery.I also created a gradient cone background to create mystery as on side of the logo is dark and the other side is much lighter and whiter.

Old logo

Sound

we needed some sounds effects in our short film and we did approach a website which had free sounds. https://freesound.org/ This is going to be very helpful for us as we do need some sounds to put in the background such as creaking doors,wind noises and even breathing.breathing. These sound effects will make the whole film more realistic and also make the scene more interesting as some of the sounds will intrigue the audience and also scare them at times as it will create an sinisterly atmosphere.

We also going to have Music playing in the background,our teacher recommend us to use a noire opening style sequence for our short film music type. Here is an example we were looking at.

                                    We cant use this YouTube clip as its not free copy right music

Here is a free copyright music that I found on Royalty free music which is called "Fast talking".

If this sound track does not work then we are allowed to create our own soundtrack. 

Opening Sequence


For our opening sequence we would like to create a collage of antiques which we took picture for at the market.This will introduces the set of the short film which is a key convention. we would like to do something like this.

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Filming

Today's filming was very stressful as the weather was not too great.Due to the high winds and rain the filming was very difficult.

Production Log Ten

In this blog post I will be writing about our graphics and filming.

Filming:This scene of me looking at necklace as its not displaying on the phone

On a Saturday me and my partner including cast started to film on a Saturday. We travelled all the way to Streatham hill which was a two hour journey. As we arrived to the location we were very shocked and surprised. We thought that the location was going to be very big and spacious, however it was a very small apartment. It didn't really bother me as I though this will be a challenge for both of us as to how we will work around this situation. I like to take risks and try to conquer the situation and try to prove that I could work around any situation. As a result I did do that as I directed my partner as to what we will do around these small spaces and how I will act the scenes, my partner agreed to my directions as he did not know what to do when we first got there.


 The weather was an issue during filming as during mid-day it’s started to rain and the room became darker. My partner kept on complaining about it but I did resolve the problem as my dad gave me a torch which changes the light mode too high to low, This torch helped us a lot during filming and made our lightening better during filming!

 

                                          

This is the exact torch we used for filming which my dad brought for us.

Overall the filming went really well, the positives of the day will have to be the different shot angles we used, the acting, my directing of recreating the scenes and also my partners filming skills. The negatives will have to be the apartment size, and also my partner contribution was lacking at times but at the end we did resolve that and we successfully completed our two scenes.

AND FINALLY...

When we completed all our filming  I and my cast had some cheeky Nando's and wafflemeister to get rid of all the stress!

                   

It worked successfully!!

Here are some more picture we took on the day

camera views girl on  the floor

This is me recording when seeing the girl on the floor

Graphics

Institutional logo

During this week we started to create our institutional logo.The 

institutional logo is firstly introduced at the beginning of the short film "Antique".This will be the first thing which the audience will see therefore it will have to be eye-catchy and creative. We created the logo in Photoshop rather then using Adobe fireworks.We believe that Photoshop will create a more polish, clean,professional look towards our final completed film and therefore it will look more effective towards our audience as it will be more eye-catchy to read,rather then using fireworks which will have a more rough look towards it.

We called our institutional logo " Enigmatic Films",as we believe that our short film creates enigma towards our audience ,we have a variety of scenes in our short film which creates enigma,an  example of this is when she throws the necklace away and then she discovers the necklace is in the coffer,this creates enigma as to how the necklace even got their.Another example is when she taking pictures of the antiques and the necklace is not displaying on her iPhone,this then leads to the women on the floor with the necklace in her hand.This creates more enigma as to why the necklace is not showing on her iPhone and who is the women displayed on the phone.,this gives an audience an idea as to there's something wrong with the necklace which is the red herrings in our short film.Thus-we are creating synergy in both the film and the institutional logo as it has the concept of enigma.

We finally completed our institutional logo by putting slight effects towards it.We made this completely by scratch as we vector traced an a image of a reel and created dents to form a wave look towards the reel.

Opening Sequence

For our opening sequence we would like to create an animated opening sequence, we had many ideas as to what we would like to do for example creating a track in a antique shop with titles emerging from the sides which establishes the name of the director,actors and the title.But by doing little research of opening sequences I came across this template which I absolutely adored. I really liked the effects on the image and how they emerged.We could replace the pictures on the footage with antiques which will be taken by us.This footage also has a old fashioned vintage look which will fit perfectly in our short film

We would like to replicate this video and make it our own version.

                                                                             

 Transitions

Here is a animation of a ink drop,We would like to use this ink drop and make it as a transition for each different location we approach.An example of this would be at the beginning when we have her in the antique shop,we will then add the ink drop transition which will introduce the next setting which is her house.I think this will look really effective and it will interests the audience rather then watching a bunch of cuts throughout the short film.

Production Log Nine

During this week I had to focus on the logistic.

During this week I was given a sheet which focused on the logistics when filming our short film. This includes:

• call sheets: This will help us and our cast to show up on the day of filming

When creating the call sheets we did have a problem as to how the weather would be during that day.We first wanted a sunny day as we both wanted that the audience will not know that the film is going to be based around the genre horror and therefore it will create enigma. But I and my partner did resolve the issue that if its a rainy day this will create pathetically which will be reflected upon the atmosphere and the situation that she will be in later when taking the necklace.This was perfect choice for I and my partner.

• Production schedule: This  schedule provides us a template of how the days will run during filming,editing and creating the products,this will outline or filming days and times

When creating the production schedule we already had fixed dates on the 14th and 15th of November as I booked the apartment on those days. On the 21st we want to record all the antique scene as on the Saturday their is more access in the market as everything is opened on that day.We are worried that there will be to much of a crowd but at the end of the day we wanted to create a vibrant atmosphere during the opening of the short film, as we wanted audience to be more involved and interested as to what is happening in the scenes.When we both finalised those dates we both realised that during the 9th-11th we are not doing anything.My partner had an idea to create the opening animation sequence and the logo of the short film which will save us alot of time rather then leaving it towards the end. Inaddtion during filming we would also like to take pictures for our magazine review and our poster to save us time rather then going back to our locations and taking pictures.

• Location recite: This will highlight  our different locations which we will be using on the day of filming.This helped me also as to how I will be using the locations and why I will be using them.

The location recci was easy to create as we knew what type of location we wanted from the very start of planning the short film.my partner and I chose an antique market which is in Portobello Road ,the reason why we chose this was that we wanted the protagonists personality to reflect upon the location.As our protagonist has a hobby of collecting hobbies and taking pictures we would like to highlight that through this location as it has a variety of antiques and funky stuff.We are planning to film on a Saturday as its the main day of shopping antiques plus it will include; Antiques Arcades, antiques stalls between Portobello Road and Kensington Park Road Portobello Green – more new fashion. In addition the market is packed with stalls from Westbourne Grove all the way up to and along Golborne Road, and across under the Westway out to Ladbroke Grove. This will be a perfect day to film as their will be a more of an atmosphere as their will be huge crowds during filming and we will be able to access more stuff on that day as everything is opened on the Saturday.Our second location is the apartment.The reason we are choosing this location is that we want the protagonists personality to reflect upon the house as shes really quirky and different.As our protagonist has a hobby of collecting antiques and taking pictures we would like to highlight that throughout house with quirky furniture and items .We chose a fun,vibrant colourful house which will look really good when film. Inaddtion their are many rooms to film in and its very spacious.Overall our main initial idea is that each location is reflected upon our protagonists persona.

• casting: This will be highlight the different job roles and casting of our film.It will also include what they are going to do on the day.Overall we already knew who we wanted in our short film as we already chose that I will put myself for acting and also my little sister as we both have a background of acting experiences. I also created a page of what we would be wearing for the short film as it will  help me and my sister as to what look we are going for.

We have completed our logistics and hopefully we could start to film soon as possible!

Directions to Location

In this blog post im going to list down all the directions for our locations from Goodmayes Station.

Apartment Location

         

                                                                      Antique Location

          

Train

There’s a choice of two underground stations: Ladbroke Grove (Hammersmith & City Lines) or Notting Hill Gate, which is on the Central, Circle and District lines.

Casting

 In this blog post I will be writing about the type of cast I will be using for my short film.

Our cast

•  Charlie Humphrey: Film director 

• Sundeep Panag: Protagonist also film director

• Manpreet Panag: Antagonist and little girl played at the end

• All actors are required to come on these following dates: 14th November , 15th November and 21st November 2015

• Required to wear theses types of clothing during filming:

Production Schedule

In this blog post I will be showing my dates of filming , editing and creating the products.

Call Sheets

In this blog post I will be showing my call sheets when recording the short film.