In this blog post I will be showing my first Ancillary Product, our magazine review.this is our first draft and there will be a few changes to match the institutional codes of a magazine review as some aspects are missing or do not match the review.
Feedback from teacher- 5-6/10
+ A very professional look towards the whole magazine
+ visually very attractive
+ layout overall very conventional
- Change text, needs to be more chatty
- Change images
- Paragraphs to long
- Enlarge the text
- Needs a quote next to title
-Remove some on the text as it unnecessary
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